Tuesday, July 27, 2010

The Tree....

I watched it.............
Everyday and night..........
Beside my house it stood,
Adding colours to my life............
My best buddy,
for the life time..........
Thats what I said
to everyone.............
But now......................
Its no more.....................
I couldn't see it...............
It was destroyed.............
I was heart broken............
I could'nt do anything..................
It has gone.............
Without even telling me a word..................

-Suhana Haneef
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5 comments:

  1. ABDU October 5, 2010 at 10:39 AM

    CONTINUATION
    _______________
    but the reason behind why .....
    it has gone, is more special to me...
    its going to be the site....
    the site for ma home ...
    cute ,little...
    but wich gave way to...
    mass destruction...
    destruction of leaves, branches, roots...

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  2. Suhana HaneefOctober 12, 2010 at 6:09 AM

    hmmmm
    thats nice..... =)
    actually i dint even hav time 2 wr8 this
    poem properly from class
    i wrote this within 10-15 min =P

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  3. ABDU January 28, 2011 at 5:44 AM

    mmm gr8

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  4. ABDU January 28, 2011 at 6:05 AM

    avoid giving (......) at the end of each line.
    try to giv a theme of somthng relevant. particularly wen u ryt for blog
    lik.. global warming, election, neglected oldage, etc

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  5. Suhana HaneefFebruary 1, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    oh kae...
    next tym..
    thnx.. ;)

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